What I did to make my poem more vivid is that everything I write I see all of it inside my head as if were a movie. I imagine the setting, the costumes, the scene and they I describe on paper without getting to graphic, some people appreciate that and other just get bored and even annoyed for the constant descriptions and reminders. I imagine what the characters would do in the scene, how would they feel in that situation, how would they react. The scenery is sometimes hard to describe because you are not sure what descriptions to keep and which ones you should just cut them, but as long as it is descriptive, simple and doesn't take more than a page to describe it I think your fine.
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Dr P
9/13/2015 04:01:44 pm
You're alluding to an important point about writing, which is that a great deal of "editing" is actually cutting.
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Dr P
9/13/2015 04:02:30 pm
You're alluding to an important point about writing, which is that a great deal of "editing" is actually cutting.
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Dr P
9/13/2015 04:02:53 pm
I have no idea why that comment appeared twice!
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